So today I did my literacy work but I didn't do it properly but hope you enjoy,
Animals
If animals were never here then we would have a much smaller diet because of
no pork beef steak chicken and all the other exotic foods that you can get from
animals sheep give us wool for coats and bears can give us their skin for rugs
jerseys coats and more animals are crucial to human survival.
Also snakes they give us cures to everything if we didn't have snakes we wouldn't
have any anti venom witch would cause so many more deaths per year due to
not having anything to treat your patient with.
Also not all animals are hunted or used take the blue whale it used to be hunted
but now it is admired as the biggest animal on the planet.
If animals were never here then we would have a much smaller diet because of
no pork beef steak chicken and all the other exotic foods that you can get from
animals sheep give us wool for coats and bears can give us their skin for rugs
jerseys coats and more animals are crucial to human survival.
Also snakes they give us cures to everything if we didn't have snakes we wouldn't
have any anti venom witch would cause so many more deaths per year due to
not having anything to treat your patient with.
Also not all animals are hunted or used take the blue whale it used to be hunted
but now it is admired as the biggest animal on the planet.
Hey Brad, nice work. I agree that things would be very different without animals! I definitely wouldn't survive in a work without them, they are pretty amazing. It would be cool if you told us what your task was about and what you were asked to do so we could understand it a little bit better. Keep up the good work. Caitlin :)
ReplyDeleteHey Brad, you may have changed the task a bit, but you have some good reasons for the importance of animals. Perhaps if you explained in the beginning that you were meant to explain humanity's greatest contribution to the world, then you could get some feedback that would help you adjust things so it matched the task, or at least people would also appreciate where your ideas came from and the thought you put in to it. In any case, I definitely agree that everything humans have done on this planet pales in comparison to the huge variety of animals on the planet and their many uses and contributions to the planet.
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