Persuasive writing for this term

Hey bloggers, this is our persuasive writing for this term and we learn lots of tricks and we had to use it in our writing and my one is about why caps should be at Marshlands school hope you guys enjoy.

Do you hate it when your hat flies away? Well your problem could disappear because there is something called caps. They are so good they look stylish and these are the thing that I will be telling you why caps are better than bucket hats protected us from sun comfortable affordable and sizes.

Is it infuriating when toroa students do not wear their hats and you have to ask them over and over again? well just go ask for some caps and I can definitely tell you that more will wear caps over bucket hats so I think that caps should come to the school and the problems should be fixed.`

  Do you notice bucket hats are so uncomfortable?  Caps are so much more comfortable. Also now you don’t have to waste any extra money on buy new bucket hats every few years because caps are adjustable sizing and optimal for all ages. So the only time you will have to pay for another cap is when you wear it out but it should be made out of durable materials. 

For my final opinion I think that it is so important that kids get proper exercise and kids might not want to play everyday if they have to deal with your hat flying away and having the frustration everyday knowing that it will just fly away and they can’t do anything about it. Lunchtime is about making new friends and running around and burning off all of your energy before you come back inside and learn and you can’t make friends when your are following your hat around the school. 

So I personally believe that toroa students should have the privileges to be able to wear caps. Now they should also be implemented into the school board for seniors because we are able to put on sunscreen on at the start of the day so hopefully you can trust the seniors with caps instead of boring old bucket hats.